Poetic Humor

Post any poetry here. It's just too hard to define "inspired" in this context, so we will settle for that which inspires.
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Poetic Humor

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:sunny: Morning meditation ...

"If numbers were feminine like boats and cars and magnetic
with negative or positive, mathematicians rule two negatives
make a positive, but two transcendentals just make ...
an algebraic disclaim 'er." :lol:

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Thanks Rod

:D I have a friend I walk with on Fridays and he is a mathematician, I think he'll like this one~
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:sunflower: There once was a dude named Jesús
who taught on a boat on a circular sea
whilst training twelve fishers of men.
They cast nets wide oft reapin' soft fins
of similar souls known as maiden. :D

:roll (adapted from Perplexity's ditty)
Then went fishin', taking good bait -
I didn’t go early and didn’t go late.
Caught eight easy fish to put in my pail -
seven were mackerel, eighth nigh whale.
Seven were simple to pack in the tin,
but nigh whale resisted whilst packin' in.
Carried pail home and what did mom say?
“Wrap 'em & freeze 'em - Tempeh Tuna today!" :lol:

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:bana: Perplexity jumped on the bandwagon!

Re: https://www.perplexity.ai/

Q: What are examples of poetic humor using this 4:4.4 pattern?

Now off to sleep,
perchance to dream,
and then awake ...
somewhere.


"Here are some examples of poetic humor using this pattern:

Now off to bed,
My cat's well-fed,
But wait, what's said?
"More treats!"

Tried counting sheep,
But fell too deep,
Now all I reap:
Loud bleats.

A midnight snack,
Fridge light attack,
Guilt's at my back.
Busted!

These examples use the 4:4.4 syllable pattern to create humorous mini-narratives with unexpected
twists in the final line. The structure allows for a setup in the first three lines and a punchline
in the fourth, lending itself well to light-hearted, witty observations." :roll


:lol: Speaking of bandwagon ...

I posted this then went to the kitchen to get "Busted!".
Time displayed on that clock: 4:44 8)

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:hithere Believe or not,
4:4.4 is not a new pattern:

"Early to bed,
early to rise,
makes a man healthy,
wealthy and wise."

but a corollary ...

Later to bed,
early to rise,
makes a man sleepy
after sunrise.

or history contrast ...

"Fee-fi-fo-fum
I smelll the bones
of an Englishman"
... fore bitcoin.

or copyright controversy ...

Revelation
usurpation!
Publication
indignation!

or comment on morality ...

Marriage is 'tween
a boy, a girl,
once lovers bake
the oven's bun.


(Perplexity) "The 4:4.4 pattern you've described is a variation of quatrain poetry, specifically a form that uses three lines of four syllables each,
followed by a fourth line that may vary in syllable count. This structure creates a rhythmic flow and allows for creative expression within a concise
format. The examples you've provided demonstrate the versatility of this pattern:

1. The classic Benjamin Franklin quote adapted to the 4:4.4 format.
2. A humorous take on the consequences of staying up late.
3. A clever juxtaposition of a fairy tale quote with modern cryptocurrency.
4. A commentary on copyright issues using alliteration.
5. A controversial statement on traditional marriage views.

These examples showcase how the 4:4.4 pattern can be used for various purposes, from conveying wisdom to making social commentary.
The structure's brevity encourages concise, impactful expression, while the fourth line often serves to complete or subvert the thought
established in the first three lines.


This poetic form allows for experimentation with rhyme, rhythm, and thematic elements within a compact framework.
It's an accessible format for both novice and experienced poets to explore ideas and play with language."


Rod :D
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Enjoying it Rod, especially the busted one...I readily identify with that one. :lol:
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:bana: A different type of "poetic humor" ...

"Secret Santa" is Christmas gift exchange where each person
selects a name from a hat and keeps that name secret,
usually until the actual gift exchange. :roll

If any other person in the group learns your selected name,
you then become "Santa"- not "Secret Santa" - and then may
buy gifts for everyone! (internet wisdom from long ago:
"A shared secret is an oxymoron.") :lol:

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:sunflower: Q: How does poetic justice relate to poetic humor?

(Perplexity) "Poetic justice and poetic humor are related concepts in literature,
but they serve different purposes and have distinct characteristics.

Poetic justice refers to the literary device where virtue is ultimately rewarded and vice is punished, often in an ironic or fitting manner.
This concept is primarily associated with moral outcomes and the distribution of rewards and punishments based on characters' actions.

Poetic humor, on the other hand, is not a widely recognized literary term. However, it can be understood as the use of wit, irony,
or comedic elements in poetry or literature to create humorous effects. While not directly related to justice, poetic humor can sometimes
overlap with poetic justice in comedic works.

In comedy, the relationship between poetic justice and humor becomes more apparent:

- Comic resolution: The happy ending in comedies often involves a form of poetic justice where good characters are rewarded
and obstacles are overcome. This resolution can be a source of satisfaction and humor for the audience.

- Ironic outcomes: Both poetic justice and humor can rely on irony. In comedy, the ironic punishment of a character's misdeeds
can be a source of humor.

- Subversion of expectations: Comedy may play with the concept of poetic justice by subverting it for humorous effect.
This can involve rewarding vice or punishing virtue in unexpected ways.

- Character comeuppance: The downfall or punishment of unlikeable characters in comedy often serves both poetic justice
and comedic purposes, satisfying the audience's sense of fairness while also providing amusement.

While poetic justice is more concerned with moral outcomes, poetic humor focuses on creating amusement.
In comedy, these concepts can work together to create satisfying and entertaining narratives
that balance moral resolution with humorous elements."


Q: Which of Shakespeare's plays feature both poetic justice and poetic humor?

(Perplexity) "Shakespeare's plays often feature elements of both poetic justice and poetic humor, though they are not always
equally present in every work. Some notable examples include: "A Midsummer Night's Dream" features poetic justice in the
resolution of the lovers' conflicts and poetic humor throughout its comedic misunderstandings and magical mishaps.

"The Merchant of Venice" combines poetic justice in Shylock's downfall with humorous scenes involving Portia's suitors.

"Twelfth Night" offers poetic justice in the unmasking of Malvolio's pride while providing ample poetic humor
through its cases of mistaken identity and witty wordplay.

"Much Ado About Nothing" presents poetic justice in the exposure of Don John's villainy and Claudio's remorse,
alongside poetic humor in the witty banter between Beatrice and Benedick.

These plays demonstrate Shakespeare's skill in balancing moral resolutions with comedic elements,
creating works that both satisfy the audience's sense of justice and entertain through clever humor."


Rod :)
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