break me apart

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break me apart

Post by happyrain » Fri Jun 29, 2018 5:34 am

oh great moon
with gravity so strong
a force remiscent of ye faithful night
where a hand ripped me from my chest
and flung me to space

fragmented
projected
yet my essence, contained within

traveling a speed so fierce
i was propelled past the universe
where the stars became a blur,

now
in fear and discomfort, for i was moving too fast
until, i am somewhere new
and stars transfigured to geometric shapes
where tiny particles lingered gently about
and they began to move

up and down

in and out...

and i begin to hear your breath

rise, and fall...

am i moving?
no
but,
i can no longer contain
the intensity within
and,
in an instant
i am no more...

an explosion occurred here
and the colour green- my essence
coalesced with you, a new world
in a new universe
and my spirit born anew...
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Re: break me apart

Post by happyrain » Fri Jun 29, 2018 5:35 am

oh great moon, from my humble abode i see you
i feel you
calling me again
here i am,
here i am

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Re: break me apart

Post by Sandy » Sun Jul 01, 2018 2:56 am

You put into words a feeling I experienced a couple nights ago as I stood outside looking up at the big beautiful moon overhead. ..feeling one with the universe. Thank you Eric...It is wonderful!
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Re: break me apart

Post by Mamo » Mon Aug 06, 2018 7:26 pm

(((Eric))) :sunflower: :kiss:


I love it!

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Re: break me apart

Post by Seeker13 » Mon Aug 06, 2018 9:24 pm

Wow Eric!

That was... intense! Like you took the rest of us with you on the journey!

Loved it,
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